Colours and face look so good, even the pose is great. Maybe a little more work on the fingers though. Really love it though, keep it up!
SukunaSpecialGrade2026-01-07 01:52
Ok thanks
SukunaSpecialGrade2026-01-07 01:52
But which hand
ShonenFresh2026-01-07 02:10
The right hand, the one pointing at the viewer
SukunaSpecialGrade2026-01-07 02:14
Ok thanks I’ll work on that. 😁
ShonenFresh2026-01-07 02:17
🫡
AKindleSoul2026-01-07 03:24
Haha awesome, it looks like he's doing that 6 7 meme lol.
Salty1452026-01-07 03:55
Something feels off about the hand, but I can’t full put my finger on it, and the presence of the chainsaw doesn’t help lol.
It’s pretty solid overall. You’ve got some nice depth and foreshortening going on and the pose is decent.
There’s a few small accuracy details missing here. For one, his neck should be black as if part of the chainsaw, not skin color. His head blade sticks out straight from his upper jaw, while this has it pointing towards the camera, through his mouth. Lastly, I figured out why the hand feels weird (partly). The blades on his hands don’t come out like he’s shooting web like Spider-Man. His hand curls up, so in this position, you’d see more of the back of the hand than what you have. Ignoring that for a second, the hand pose is also unnatural. Try replicating it by yourself and you’ll see what I mean (that or I’m just not flexible) and generally a pose you have to force like this one should be avoided.
For general pointers, your linework and anatomy could still use some work. Line work might be an intentional stylistic choice, if so, try keeping the scratchiness on the shading lines too, otherwise the effect doesn’t quite work as intended. For anatomy, your hands are decent, but I’d focus on the shoulders. You’ve got a little too much neck girth and his left arm has three joints, when it should be two.
If I’m nagging a little too much, my bad, but you asked for feedback and I always feel obliged to give it to fellow artists when they ask. You’ve got ambition, that’s for sure, and if you stick with it I think you’ve got a lot of room to improve quickly if you focus yourself. Would love to see more pieces from you posted here in the future.
KawaiNatte2026-01-07 11:14
6 7
SukunaSpecialGrade2026-01-07 21:57
Thank u I see what u mean about the neck, I see what u mean about the head blade, and the hand, and the left arm. Thanks for the feedback and everything, I’ll try to work on the shoulders. But what did u mean about the shading if the scratchy lines are intentional?
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It’s pretty solid overall. You’ve got some nice depth and foreshortening going on and the pose is decent.
There’s a few small accuracy details missing here. For one, his neck should be black as if part of the chainsaw, not skin color. His head blade sticks out straight from his upper jaw, while this has it pointing towards the camera, through his mouth. Lastly, I figured out why the hand feels weird (partly). The blades on his hands don’t come out like he’s shooting web like Spider-Man. His hand curls up, so in this position, you’d see more of the back of the hand than what you have. Ignoring that for a second, the hand pose is also unnatural. Try replicating it by yourself and you’ll see what I mean (that or I’m just not flexible) and generally a pose you have to force like this one should be avoided.
For general pointers, your linework and anatomy could still use some work. Line work might be an intentional stylistic choice, if so, try keeping the scratchiness on the shading lines too, otherwise the effect doesn’t quite work as intended. For anatomy, your hands are decent, but I’d focus on the shoulders. You’ve got a little too much neck girth and his left arm has three joints, when it should be two.
If I’m nagging a little too much, my bad, but you asked for feedback and I always feel obliged to give it to fellow artists when they ask. You’ve got ambition, that’s for sure, and if you stick with it I think you’ve got a lot of room to improve quickly if you focus yourself. Would love to see more pieces from you posted here in the future.